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Enchanted Seduction

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PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 8:56 am
Sorry it sucks >.< I wrote it off the top of my head in like 5 minutes.



When life seems like it won't go on,

And your lost is a sea of blackness,

Just look to a new dawn,

Cause is coming.



Forget what people tell you,

What they do.

They arent important,

That's only you.



People will die,

People will hurt,

People will cry,

Don't get lost in the dirt.



Look to the future.

Forget the past.

Don't listen to the people.

Just push and stand fast
 
PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 3:47 pm
it was well put together but I didn't agree with the "forget the past" thing. (You can't see the future without looking through the scope of the past.)  

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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 11:46 am
i really like the 1st one its good
you cant change the past all you can do is work towards making a better future  
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