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Paradoxismminant
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PostPosted: Thu May 27, 2010 9:18 am

Hands
Slightly calloused
They touch gently
Softer than an aristocrat's
Smooth
Manicured
Cold
Cold
Hands.
 
PostPosted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:38 am
like it so far it describe dark feature hands of a vampire guy  

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 3:12 am
or how it describe when going to the nail spa and etc mrgreen and how it was done  
PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 7:30 pm

lool

I like to think of it as a someone thinking about their lover's hands. Like how even though they're all calloused, they still feel really wonderful to them.
 

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 6:36 pm
that seem true in all but how it felt like to be touch in that hand for a certain way  
PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:53 pm

I'm not sure what you mean sweatdrop
 

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:56 am
it feel likes that hand is like it soft and strong  
PostPosted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:10 pm

Yeah, I was trying to show the duality^^.
 

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:06 am
which by the way amazing keep writing more i want to read it i will make good points  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:32 pm

Alright, I'll do my best whee
 

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:36 am
will be happy to read it. thanks. heart  
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