Drawing critique

[Krystal_digitaliS]

i drew this recently, and i was wondering if any of you had an idea on how i could improve my drawing technique? Any help or critique would be much appreciated.. and yes it is kate moss with an eyepatch.  

[starlightskyblue]

The shade was done pretty good biggrin the light 's clear and she does got sexy lips lol

ok here's the thing... from looking at the picture looks like you were trying to draw straight face or may be I was wrong but the right (my right) part of the face... ooks a lil too high :
or even if u try to draw from the side, the nose n the mouth still look straight :

but I can say : good job! smile  

[Jenudi]

it is done pretty well. when I draw I usually do not make things look realistic. This is one of my more simple/beginner ones. I really like painting.

 

[Krystal_digitaliS]

yuikami

The shade was done pretty good biggrin the light 's clear and she does got sexy lips lol

ok here's the thing... from looking at the picture looks like you were trying to draw straight face or may be I was wrong but the right (my right) part of the face... ooks a lil too high :
or even if u try to draw from the side, the nose n the mouth still look straight :

but I can say : good job! smile

Thanks for the adivce, i will put it to use in my next drawing, muaha  

[Wind Dancer IX]

Wow! That is amazing! Amazing job with shading, exept for her right cheek, it seems as if your shaded it just a bit too dark. Other than that you are an amazing artist!  

[Krystal_digitaliS]

dancerintheroom

Wow! That is amazing! Amazing job with shading, exept for her right cheek, it seems as if your shaded it just a bit too dark. Other than that you are an amazing artist!

thankyou smile i'll upload another drawing later, when it's finished. its not as good as this one sad but oh well  

[miigiro]

It looks good and really realistic, but the face looks slanted. I don't know how to explain it, but yeah. ACtually, maybe its just me? Ahaha! I don't know. But I really like it! It reminds me of the old 70's posters. AHaha!  

[Krystal_digitaliS]

mrmrs_sukiher

It looks good and really realistic, but the face looks slanted. I don't know how to explain it, but yeah. ACtually, maybe its just me? Ahaha! I don't know. But I really like it! It reminds me of the old 70's posters. AHaha!

yteah, its slkanted but not in the actual drawing, its cos i don't have a scanner and i had to take a photo of it and well, the photo turned out retarded  

[miigiro]

Oh okay! In that case, then it's really good! I still love it! biggrin  

[Krystal_digitaliS]

Thankyou  

[Koiyuki]

I was also going to say something about the slanting, but that has been discussed. In that case, what I recommend, *since you're a realist* is thoroughly studying human anatomy and bone and muscle structure. How it moves, how it casts light, and so on.  

[starlightskyblue]

Jfo

it is done pretty well. when I draw I usually do not make things look realistic. This is one of my more simple/beginner ones. I really like painting.

it's not nice to show your work in other people's topic confused
it just literary not nice