What I Can't Say

[Dark Mage Girl Xion]

I wish I could tell you
That I love you.
Every day
The feeling grows,
And every single word we exchange
Makes the feeling even stronger.
I love you.
Three simple word I could never say...
Would you feel the same?
Or would you turn away?
I don't want you to abandon me.
But I can't take you not knowing.
You hold my heart in your hand.
Do you love me?
I guess I'll never know...

Please let me know what you think! >.<  

[Snicketfile2014]

Very deep. You should be proud to be the author of this poem.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

it is very deep and poetic and that the person should honestly tell the person how they feel and be honest with themselves do they really love that person. or are they going to playing with your emotions that gets you not anywhere else. i think you be honest with yourself before telling that person how you feel. i had to say it was very deep and poetic and romantic  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

it sort like you were worry they would abandoned you .  

[Dark Mage Girl Xion]

Thank you both so much! redface I worked very hard on the poem, and I'm glad you took the time to read it and give such kind comments!  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

your welcome just continue on poem i would be delight to read more from you. it looks great