Your Cruelty

[Dark Mage Girl Xion]

You couldn't accept who I am, so you turned me away.
You wanted me to tell you lies that would only make you feel better.
You felt better after these lies, while I sat there, torn into pieces.
You blamed the people I care about most for who I am.
You acted as if I had control over who I am and how I feel.
You let me think everything was fine when it wasn't, then you turned on me as if this were a new problem.
You lied to me and gave me a false sense of security.
You went about life as usual, while I sat alone with nothing but my own tears.
You didn't realize how much your words hurt me.
You have done so much to hurt me...

So why is it I feel like I'm the one who let you down, like I'm the one who hurt you, like I should be hated, like I have to lie to you so you can give me love that I thought was unconditional, like I should control how I feel and who I am, like I deserve to cry for what I've put you through?

Sorry, I know this is kind of depressing but meh, whatever! Please comment!  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

it very well descriptive of how you feel when you betrayed by someone. you don't know what to do. i understand how you feel. I think you should forget about him and live on. you deserve better madam. i like it so far it is little bit a sad romance. very emotional i see it.  

[Dark Mage Girl Xion]

Actually, this is about a family member, not a romantic interest, but thank you for your kind words! 3nodding  

[The Willow Of Darkness]

Hmm, that works as a list describing what has happened to you, but I don't think it works to well as a poem. Lacks imagery. About the only bit of imagery in there is "torn into pieces." For it to work as a poem I think there needs to be more imagery so that a reader gets a sensory experience and can better connect with the poem emotionally.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

well it good and yeah i have to agree with the lady what she is saying. it is wonderful and great