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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:24 pm
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i wrote this three years ago tell me if it could be adopted into an rp (with some changes of the names, numbers and character types of course) and if it needs improvement
Tiny’s Greatest Adventure Ever
Chapter1: the letter
Once upon a time there was a stick person named tiny McDade the third. He was like most of the other stick people except he had the worst luck of all. If it weren’t for the fact that it is impossible to kill a stick person, this story might not exist.
It was a regular morning, for a Monday, everything was normal. The kids were all waiting for the school bus, to go to school, and tiny was on His way to work with a hot Starbucks coffee in his hand, hoping nothing bad would happen today. But, when he got to work, his boss AKA bossman handed him a letter from his friend Jim-Bob-Joe-Bob-Jack-Johnson. His boss told him that it was first class emergency mail for only tiny to read. So, tiny opened the letter and read;
Dear tiny, I fear that I am in need of help, for I have been kidnapped. I don’t know by who, or why, but I do know that you will be the only person to save me. I don’t have much time, so please hurry! Your friend in dire need of help, Jim-Bob-Joe-Bob-Jack-Johnson.
When tiny finished reading the letter, he didn’t know what to do so he went to the only person who knew what to do, Guru Joe.
Tiny was outside of Guru Joe’s apartment when he heard a loud snap. When he looked up there was a large safe falling towards him. He was so scared he couldn’t move, then all of a sudden he felt a pain in his abdomen and realized that someone had saved him from being crushed. When tiny finally came back to his senses, he realized that the person who saved him was Guru Joe. Later on, in Guru Joe’s room, tiny showed Joe the letter and Guru Joe said “In order to find your friend you must have twelve followers.” Tiny had a look of confusion on his face when Joe got done speaking. Guru Joe said, “Why is that look on your face, young one?” “Why twelve followers?” tiny replied. “Because the gate of death is too big and heavy for one person to open alone” he said.
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