New to digital painting + Anathomy FAIL :.

[Deloix]

I've had OpenCanvas for a few months now, and these are the only two things I've got done so far:

That's my OC, Kaisora, lookin' funny.

And a free headshot for someone an a different site:


I also have a quick colour sketch on my dA, Renashi-x.

Please give comments and critique, I want Kaisora to be walking away, with on arm out, so if you do redline,that would REALLY HELP.
I'm starting life drawing.

 

[Vanna1994]

Your first one is very pretty ^^
Although, it looks like her head is backwards, try pushing the shoulder back a bit, the neck starts out nice but gets thinner towards the bottom.
Hope i helped some