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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 12:24 pm

Firstly,
I think I should warn you, the picture (and comic, in the link below) have Boy's love in it (for those who don' like that stuff).
and secondly,
Edgar and Noah come from Pandect, and a copyright by Dina Situ.

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y24/mellmell/coupleno_ed.jpg

I just wanted to know how you guys think it looks. It's for a contest, and I wanted it to look the best it could be. If there's any mistakes you see, please point them out. <3 Wheeee

Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2006 4:03 pm

When you say 'left', do you mean the viewer's left or the characters' left?

For the guy on the left (viewer's left), his head looks fine to me. The guy on the right, however, needs a little bit of adjusting with his neck. It's really thick where the neck meets the head.

I don't see anything wrong with the picture other than that.

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MooMooJuice

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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 3:15 pm

RoninCeta

When you say 'left', do you mean the viewer's left or the characters' left?

For the guy on the left (viewer's left), his head looks fine to me. The guy on the right, however, needs a little bit of adjusting with his neck. It's really thick where the neck meets the head.

I don't see anything wrong with the picture other than that.

Viewers left.
and I don't understand what you mean by thick.

Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 2:35 pm

the guy on the right's head looks too high up. if you have paint shop, I would select that area and move it and the hand together atop it down to where his adam's apple is. His head and neck just don't add up, it looks funky. Other than that everything looks great! I really like that drawing smile

Good luck with the contest! Are you going to be coloring this?

Syrisala

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MooMooJuice

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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 8:25 pm

Syrisala

the guy on the right's head looks too high up. if you have paint shop, I would select that area and move it and the hand together atop it down to where his adam's apple is. His head and neck just don't add up, it looks funky. Other than that everything looks great! I really like that drawing smile

Good luck with the contest! Are you going to be coloring this?

Er, I don't have paint shop (nor know what it is).
Besides, how do I move it without getting something I don't want to move?

Yes, I am coloring it, but I don't think I'll enter the colored version into the contest.

Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 10:49 am

ooo pretty!! heart lol. i like the guy on top. he has pretty eyes and pretty hair whee um the top guy's right cheek(character's right) can be shifted a bit higher i think. looks a lil chubby there. for the lower guy, he looks scary o_o;; mainly because of the two triangles under his eyes xD also, his neck is too long
beautifully drawn hands <3 (i hate drawing hands. rawr) nice poses; they look really natural. i love the cleaness of your lineart biggrin

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