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 Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 12:13 pm
Hi! : D Just gonna jump straight into it, haha; I really like Cherry, she sounds very fun, both to play and to RP with! : D She's nicely thought out and I think you've rounded a lot of things in her personality section, giving the reader a good idea of who she is and how she acts (and reacts). I think you've been great at giving her both good and bad points; I'd say the favour is currently tipped slightly in favour of there being more bad points than good, though - I think you can safely take the fear of Hunters part and put it in her likes / dislikes, unless it's really something that affects her on a daily basis (for example, being so paranoid about Hunters coming to get her that she violently mistrusts anyone who looks too human, ie Reapers, or something like that). I also think it might also be a good idea to add the stuff you have in your third post (her family circumstance and reaction to it) to what you've already written for the 'Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy?' answer, since it's a good elaboration on why she wants to explore and improve on her potential. Also, I'm not sure 'unconfined' is the right word for her (I had to look it up and it meant 'free from physical restraints' which doesn't really fit, haha), I think maybe 'insecure' would be better? I'm rubbish at natural abilities and FEAR, so I'm not going to attempt an assessment there (for everyone's good, lol). All in all, I think you have a really solid, fun character base and there's clearly great room for Cherry to grow in RP. : D I´think you've done a great job and I can't wait to see her in play!
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 12:37 pm
Hey there! Congrats on being picked up for QF! biggrin
Just as a note, don't forget to change your title to [ENROLLMENT] and post in the enrollment thread!
Nat ability > This seems good, though maybe just a teensy bit of clarification - does she naturally just slip into the shadows, making it difficult for others to see her? Can she generate the shadows herself, or does she have to be in an area where there are already shadows? Just some limitations / explanations will make this easier to understand!
FEAR > This unfortunately needs to be changed a little; the only species allowed to use items / weapons are reapers, so she wouldn't be able to use her bandages.
History > While an interest concept, this really wouldn't fall into line with the TiH storyline and its canon. New students coming into Amityville don't really know or understand what hunters are (they're more like a fairy tale, so to speak), so this really wouldn't work too well. You could say that she's afraid of humans in general, but not hunters.
Other than that, she seems good! Welcome to TiH!
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 1:32 pm
Ephebe Hi! : D Just gonna jump straight into it, haha; I really like Cherry, she sounds very fun, both to play and to RP with! : D She's nicely thought out and I think you've rounded a lot of things in her personality section, giving the reader a good idea of who she is and how she acts (and reacts). I think you've been great at giving her both good and bad points; I'd say the favour is currently tipped slightly in favour of there being more bad points than good, though - I think you can safely take the fear of Hunters part and put it in her likes / dislikes, unless it's really something that affects her on a daily basis (for example, being so paranoid about Hunters coming to get her that she violently mistrusts anyone who looks too human, ie Reapers, or something like that). I also think it might also be a good idea to add the stuff you have in your third post (her family circumstance and reaction to it) to what you've already written for the 'Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy?' answer, since it's a good elaboration on why she wants to explore and improve on her potential. Also, I'm not sure 'unconfined' is the right word for her (I had to look it up and it meant 'free from physical restraints' which doesn't really fit, haha), I think maybe 'insecure' would be better? I'm rubbish at natural abilities and FEAR, so I'm not going to attempt an assessment there (for everyone's good, lol). All in all, I think you have a really solid, fun character base and there's clearly great room for Cherry to grow in RP. : D I´think you've done a great job and I can't wait to see her in play! Thank you for pointing that out it's a misspelling I meant unconfident, unsure of herself. Thank you ^_^ I'll make those few edits
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 1:37 pm
kuroopu Hey there! Congrats on being picked up for QF! biggrin
Just as a note, don't forget to change your title to [ENROLLMENT] and post in the enrollment thread!
Nat ability > This seems good, though maybe just a teensy bit of clarification - does she naturally just slip into the shadows, making it difficult for others to see her? Can she generate the shadows herself, or does she have to be in an area where there are already shadows? Just some limitations / explanations will make this easier to understand!
FEAR > This unfortunately needs to be changed a little; the only species allowed to use items / weapons are reapers, so she wouldn't be able to use her bandages.
History > While an interest concept, this really wouldn't fall into line with the TiH storyline and its canon. New students coming into Amityville don't really know or understand what hunters are (they're more like a fairy tale, so to speak), so this really wouldn't work too well. You could say that she's afraid of humans in general, but not hunters.
Other than that, she seems good! Welcome to TiH! Thank you I'll change hunter to humans then And what I meant about the bandages wasn't a weapon, The chill is healing right? I was talking about using shadows to heal, taking a shadow and kinda wrapping it around a wound. And yes I was thinking, only when shadows are present she can hide in them, thus her dislike of overly bright places. So if she were trapped in a blazing bright room there would be no place for her to hide.
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 2:25 pm
I changed a few things based on what you two said, is that alright using shadows, with the same weakness as her natural ability, she needs shadows to use her fear ability.
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 11:22 pm
Midnightglow18 I changed a few things based on what you two said, is that alright using shadows, with the same weakness as her natural ability, she needs shadows to use her fear ability.
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2014 5:32 am
kuroopu Midnightglow18 I changed a few things based on what you two said, is that alright using shadows, with the same weakness as her natural ability, she needs shadows to use her fear ability. Yup ^_^ thank you
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2014 7:55 pm
Midnightglow18 Just keep in mind that since FEAR success is determined by dice rolls, she might end up succeeding in full sunlight or failing in darkness, so you want to be able to account for that when you have her in a battle! BASIC CHARACTER KIT WHAT DO I DO NEXT Welcome to This is Halloween! Congratulations! Your character has passed the enrollment process and you're cleared to begin playing. Essentially, this means you can get your art certed, make your character's journal, and most importantly start RPing. If you're a little lost then don't worry, this guide is here to point you in the right direction. gaia_crown [ Art Check! ]: - Do you have your character's art? Great! Move onto the next crown. - If you do NOT yet have your art, you may now contact your artist and let them know that they may now start on creating your character! gaia_crown [ Certs & Emblems ]: - If your character is a STUDENT, you may create a customized student pin for them. This is entirely optional (but fun!) special badge that is unique to your character's design! You can find more information about pins (also known as their emblem) here. - Hallowen characters (Students & Horsemen) may bet their character certed here! - Hunters may get their certs here! gaia_crown [ Creating a Journal ]: - A journal is a thread where you can keep track of your character's accomplishments, RPs, progress, relationships, etc! - All HALLOWEEN characters (Students & Horsemen) may create one here! - All Hunters may create one here! gaia_crown [ Let's RP! ]: - Don't be shy about RPing! As soon as your character has been enroll approved you can start! Check out this awesome information about The World of Halloween and Amityville Academy. All students start off in Amityville academy. Need more things to do? Check out this whole subforum! Anything labelled Activity is open for you! Occasionally GMs will promote and open CLASSROOM orps. These usually happen in the classroom subforum. All students are invited to participate! - If you are a Hunter, you will want to read the Hunter Newbie Guide Occasionally GMs will promote and open MISSION orps. These usually happen in the main Deus subforum and be followed by a guild announcement. All Hunters are invited to participate! - If you are a Horsemen, please refer to here and the handy links in the first post as well as the other posts for concurrent and quest information! Need more things to do? Check out this whole subforum! Anything labelled Activity is open for you! Occasionally GMs will promote and open CLASSROOM orps. These usually happen in the classroom subforum. All Horsemen are invited to participate! gaia_crown [ What's happening currently? ]: - We try to keep all important things happening regularily updated in the ANNOUNCEMENTS THREAD. This goes for ALL FACTIONS. Have a question? Ask it in the Q & A ! gaia_crown [ Still feeling a little lost or overwhelmed? That's okay! ]: - Check out what was just mentioned in FULL DETAIL HERE! Don't be too overwhelmed, there's time to sort everything out. For now, just enjoy some simple RP! gaia_crown [ Finding RP ]: - There's a bunch of ways to find RP. You can just contact a friend or any shop regular OR one of our available GMS for help! Otherwise, there are a lot of people looking to plot with YOU in their plotting threads! You can even make your own and advertise in your sig/ in the main thread/ etc etc! - In addition any thread marked ORP is open for you to join! - If you ever feel lost as a newbie, our many GMs are more than happy to one on one RP with you to help your character get acquainted. Send a PM to WE ARE HALLOWEEN and we can get you started this way as well. Otherwise, enjoy immersing yourself in the many RPS in TiH! It is all about discovery after all!
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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2014 5:25 am
lizbot Midnightglow18 Just keep in mind that since FEAR success is determined by dice rolls, she might end up succeeding in full sunlight or failing in darkness, so you want to be able to account for that when you have her in a battle! BASIC CHARACTER KIT WHAT DO I DO NEXT Welcome to This is Halloween! Congratulations! Your character has passed the enrollment process and you're cleared to begin playing. Essentially, this means you can get your art certed, make your character's journal, and most importantly start RPing. If you're a little lost then don't worry, this guide is here to point you in the right direction. gaia_crown [ Art Check! ]: - Do you have your character's art? Great! Move onto the next crown. - If you do NOT yet have your art, you may now contact your artist and let them know that they may now start on creating your character! gaia_crown [ Certs & Emblems ]: - If your character is a STUDENT, you may create a customized student pin for them. This is entirely optional (but fun!) special badge that is unique to your character's design! You can find more information about pins (also known as their emblem) here. - Hallowen characters (Students & Horsemen) may bet their character certed here! - Hunters may get their certs here! gaia_crown [ Creating a Journal ]: - A journal is a thread where you can keep track of your character's accomplishments, RPs, progress, relationships, etc! - All HALLOWEEN characters (Students & Horsemen) may create one here! - All Hunters may create one here! gaia_crown [ Let's RP! ]: - Don't be shy about RPing! As soon as your character has been enroll approved you can start! Check out this awesome information about The World of Halloween and Amityville Academy. All students start off in Amityville academy. Need more things to do? Check out this whole subforum! Anything labelled Activity is open for you! Occasionally GMs will promote and open CLASSROOM orps. These usually happen in the classroom subforum. All students are invited to participate! - If you are a Hunter, you will want to read the Hunter Newbie Guide Occasionally GMs will promote and open MISSION orps. These usually happen in the main Deus subforum and be followed by a guild announcement. All Hunters are invited to participate! - If you are a Horsemen, please refer to here and the handy links in the first post as well as the other posts for concurrent and quest information! Need more things to do? Check out this whole subforum! Anything labelled Activity is open for you! Occasionally GMs will promote and open CLASSROOM orps. These usually happen in the classroom subforum. All Horsemen are invited to participate! gaia_crown [ What's happening currently? ]: - We try to keep all important things happening regularily updated in the ANNOUNCEMENTS THREAD. This goes for ALL FACTIONS. Have a question? Ask it in the Q & A ! gaia_crown [ Still feeling a little lost or overwhelmed? That's okay! ]: - Check out what was just mentioned in FULL DETAIL HERE! Don't be too overwhelmed, there's time to sort everything out. For now, just enjoy some simple RP! gaia_crown [ Finding RP ]: - There's a bunch of ways to find RP. You can just contact a friend or any shop regular OR one of our available GMS for help! Otherwise, there are a lot of people looking to plot with YOU in their plotting threads! You can even make your own and advertise in your sig/ in the main thread/ etc etc! - In addition any thread marked ORP is open for you to join! - If you ever feel lost as a newbie, our many GMs are more than happy to one on one RP with you to help your character get acquainted. Send a PM to WE ARE HALLOWEEN and we can get you started this way as well. Otherwise, enjoy immersing yourself in the many RPS in TiH! It is all about discovery after all! Thank you, though I imagine she'll be more surprised if her magic works in the sun razz
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