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Eloquent Conversationalist
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 Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 12:47 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 6:24 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 10:22 am
Looks good.
I like how you shade her face
Looks really cool. The color choice is nice too.
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Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 2:07 pm
Oh my...that's really good.
I love the way you did the hair.
How it's all swirly and stuff.
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Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 7:35 pm
i really love the face-her luscious, smirking lips and her half-lidded eyes..
what bothers me is the hair.. it almost seems too... chunky.. with the way it's supposed to be flowing wildly (like the 'inferno' you named it after)
still, it's very good, i applaud you! smile
-edit- i wanted to revise what i said about the hair.. it's just the bottom left area of the hair that bothers me.. that's what seems chunky or..just too thick in the spirals
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Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 1:20 am
DarkNeko86 i really love the face-her luscious, smirking lips and her half-lidded eyes.. what bothers me is the hair.. it almost seems too... chunky.. with the way it's supposed to be flowing wildly (like the 'inferno' you named it after) still, it's very good, i applaud you! smile -edit- i wanted to revise what i said about the hair.. it's just the bottom left area of the hair that bothers me.. that's what seems chunky or..just too thick in the spirals Yep noticed that too... and it bothers me too, so agree with you 100%. Just too lazy to change it xd And thank you very much everyone for your kind comments heart
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Eloquent Conversationalist
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Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 2:07 am
I'm quite partial to the shading on her face, and the complexion itself is neat too. Alas, I don't believe it to really suit the rough look of the hair. Her face is unfortunately awkward; for example her head (specifically the upper portion of her skull) is much too bloated, and the eyeballs seem to be running a little too far to the edge. And also, though I do think this is more of a personal opinion, there is no true flow within the general image - everything is too centered on her head, thereby lacking balance.
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Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:29 am
Miser Bellatrix I'm quite partial to the shading on her face, and the complexion itself is neat too. Alas, I don't believe it to really suit the rough look of the hair. Her face is unfortunately awkward; for example her head (specifically the upper portion of her skull) is much too bloated, and the eyeballs seem to be running a little too far to the edge. And also, though I do think this is more of a personal opinion, there is no true flow within the general image - everything is too centered on her head, thereby lacking balance. I agree on a few points, for example her eyes aren't drawn correctly and the shading on her forehead (which by the way is too big too, I always manage to draw them too big) could be a bit rougher/bolder. And when it comes to the flow, then I'd like to point out that this is not a refined piece of art, it's more like something I did to relax while experimenting. I'm very bad at finishing my art pieces, I always seem to have a problem concentrating through the whole piece. Thank you for the comment and critique 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 12:17 pm
Not everything needs an actual flow though, with pieces like this personally I think need at least some sort of flow, since there's just something special about the concept. Y'know?
-- You're welcome.
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