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Nekojin__x

PostPosted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 9:22 am
..I'll post my poetry..

Autopsy.
I still remember your face when you saw me at the autopsy..
I'm the body you didn't want to identify..
But you saw me in all my glory..
Bleeding from the wrists..

Look at my skin, broken and pale..
My eyes are glazed as were my hopes..
You think you see a feint smile..
But no, my smiles were gone long before..

You see the wounds..
And how they were inflicted..
A knife with your name..
Carved in the handle..

This is the end for me..
My mind couldn't take it..
My screams were held back..
All for you..


Why.
Why do the police beat the different?
Why do the wars never end?
Why must we live in a world eithout love?
Why do our life's never mend?

Why are the failures our leaders?
Why can't they do their jobs?
Why must they lie to those in the world?
Why are they hopeless slobs?

Shouldn't we all have a place in this world?
Living in harmony?
If it can't be done.
[i]Then why? [/i]
 
PostPosted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 3:22 pm
Oh, snap . . . maybe that's the wrong expressiong, but I felt a lot of shock reading Autopsy. That one was really sweet.
` I just didn't like Why that much because you never put your reason in, or your solution, for all the problems that it mentioned . . . but that's my taste in terms of poems. Still, Autopsy was really cool.  

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JoY_AnGel

PostPosted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 3:59 pm
Your poetry is veyr nice.

But please post your poetry and other writtings here please.  
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