On The Train
There is a man. He is sitting in the seat next to me and going red in the face with anger, shouting into his mobile phone at the top of his lungs. I slowly edge away from him and bump into the obese lady on the other side of me. She glares at me and rearranges her skirt, giving me a glimpse of her horrible frilly undies. I bury my face in my hands feeling like a dirty insect that has just been stepped on.
The wrinkled lady opposite me with kind twinkling eyes beckons to me with one gnarled finger and I stand up and stagger over to where she is sitting. The train floor lurches under my feet and I stumble, grabbing the handrail to steady myself. The lady rummages through her black and white handbag. I hold my breath in anticipation. She smiles, her skin stretching back over her teeth to reveal her yellowed gums, and produces a lollipop. The lollipop is red and leaking its juices all over its clear cellophane wrapper. I smile politely and take the lollipop, peeling off the wrapper and shoving it into my mouth,
After wobbling from one end of the train to the other, I sit back between the obese lady and the angry man, holding the lollipop wrapper in my left hand. The sticky juices have leaked out of it and onto my skin, and the wrapper is effectively glued to my palm. I wish desperately that the person who had designed the train had thought to put a bin in it somewhere. I peel the wrapper off my hand with my right hand, and it sticks onto that too. Now I have two sticky hands and the train doesn’t come with washing basins.
I fidget, wriggling from side to side, wishing desperately that I had thrown the lollipop out the window at the first opportunity. The obese lady glares at me again and says, “In my day, little children did not so rudely jostle their elders.” There. She had succeeded in making me feel like a cockroach again. A red wave of anger washes over me. It is strangely refreshing. I lightly place my right hand on the back of her skirt and pull away. The lollipop wrapper sticks there like a little red beacon. I giggle guiltily as I step off the train. The angry man winks at me, and he doesn’t seem as threatening as he did before.
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