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BlackHawkGS

PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 12:49 pm
Episode 8.

*The stoplight boots up*

Ritz: Brian, I really don't think I have the hang of this yet!

*The light flashes red*

Spyke: Hell, I can't remember where the ascend button is! ... oh... nevermind... it's above the descend button...

*The light flashes yellow*

Polka: Talk about coincidence: I got a polka-dotie board! Yay! ... wait, how do you fly these thingies again?

*The light flashes GREEN.*

Brian: Here... we... GO!!

*All four StreamBoards, advanced sky-flying hoverboards from the future, launch from the SpaceShip. Brian's immedietely gains control and starts pulling off flips. While everyone else... ehh...*

Polka: *Spins in circles as she falls faster* AHHHH!

Brian: *Yells from above* Polka, you're finger is on the right-turn button!

Polka: ... oh. There we go! Yay!

Spyke: *Eventually gains balance* Woah... these things are actually pretty fun. You got everyone under control, Brian?

Brian: Yup! You seem to be ok, Polka isn't spinning like a top anymore and... *Looks down.* AH! RITTERZ!!!

*Brian clicks a few buttons, slams down his right foot on the front of his board, and goes into a fast dive.*

Ritz: *Is rapidly descending.* Looks like I'm dying at the age of 19... too bad there isn't a slideshow of my life flashing before my eyes... SINCE I HAVE NO MEMORIES.... it'd probably be a short slideshow, anyhow...

Brian: *Catches up to her and shouts over the sound of the rushing wind.* Ritz! You have to press the power button to turn on your board!

Ritz: But where is- ... nevermind... I was standing on it... *Clicks button with her foot and pulls out of dive.*

*By the time Ritz and Brian pull ot of the descent, they break through the bottom layer of clouds. The capital of Seed, called Rebirth, is spread out before them. The huge skyscrapers, the thousands of people, and many flying vehicles all lay beneath their feet.*

Spyke: *Catches up to them, Polka following right behind.* Hey, are you guys al- ... s**t, that's a big city.

Brian: Well, it is the capital of like... everything. Every city and planet in the Pegasus Galaxy and few colonies in neighboring galaxies.

Ritz: How do you know this?

Brian: Internet.

*All four make their final descent to the ground. They land in a neighborhood on the outer limits of the city. Then they remove their boards from their feet, attaching them to their backs for later use.*

Polka: Hey, it's my house! *She points at a giant 3-story mansion.

Brian: FOR THE LAST TIME, THAT IS NOT YOUR-

Spyke: She's right.

Brian: Buh?

Spyke: This 'transer' device is something I picked up on the SpaceShip. It seems to be acting as a sort of mini-internet. And from what it says... a girl with blonde hair, a polka-dot dress, and white hair clips was kidnapped earlier this year.

Ritz: So if this is her home, why were you and Spyke yelling at her awhile ago that it wasn't?

Brian and Spyke: Ummmm... ehh...

Polka: YOU HATE ME!?!?!?

Brian: Well not entire-

Spyke: *Quickly evades subject.* And there's a name here!

Ritz: About time. Calling her by this ridiculous dance genre is getting annoying. What is it?

Spyke: Hmmm... her official name seems to be

A new world to explore!
The memories of an adventurer will be revealed!
... yes, I left that out on purpose. Just to annoy all of you.
 
PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 12:54 pm
God is everyone taking after Zahmen now?!
Very good teaser Hawk.

But why does she remember?
Must wait I guess..
 

Tak-Jak
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broken_91

PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 1:12 pm
RAWRAWRAWR. -takes all your cookies-

None for you until you post up the next episode. Bite me.


-grumbles- stupid cliffhanger ending making me curious..  
PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 2:30 pm
okay, we all know that only Zee can do cliffhangers...and me, to an extent.

NOT YOU.

NO COOKIES UNTIL YOU POST THE NEXT EPISODE. *dangles cookies just out of reach*  

KirbyVictorious


Oukow

PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:10 pm
Her name is...? HER NAME IS!? WHAT IS IT!!!?? *sobs*  
PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:47 pm
ohhh, you meanie! Now I'll have to wait. *pouts*  

The Duchess Grey

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Xahmen
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:54 pm
Stob raggin' y'all, I like it.
And stop going me so much credit, didn't I just delete everything I've done?  
PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 11:07 pm
*waits for next installment*

I'm actually slightly disappointed... there's no new subliminal message that I can find in his siggy... neutral emo  

Gomenroia


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 12:22 pm
lol watch her name actially be Polka rofl  
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