Prt. 2

[Xahmen]

So anyways, I'm sitting on my couch cutting a line when the girl finally came out of the shower and sat next to me.

I looked at her and shook my head in disgust; the vermin hadn't bothered to put any clothes on. I grunted and pointed towards the closet by the bathroom.

She asked me if I had any clothes.
I rolled my eyes and grunted again, shaking my pointed hand again.
She mumbled something under her breath and stumbled over to the linen closet, extracted a robe that seemed to fit her fairly well; and sat down in the old loveseat across the room from me.

I grumbled and snorted the line of white gold.

She asked me why I was so quiet.
I opened my mouth and showed her why I was "so quiet" all the time.

The recoil was just what they all did.

I took my razor and cut into the cocaine the words "Abusive Boyfriend".
She asked my how I lost my tongue.

I groaned and shook my head.  

[Elf of the Shadows]

Ouch, I'd be missing my tongue, I talk too much. I liked the style. A little strange of a story, but I liked it.  

[KirbyVictorious]

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um..........

owch. crying

Funny, there's a character like that in my book...mute, I mean. Not really a drug addict. And, um, eight.  

[lucyVUITTON]

Wow. Ouch. Nice writing, though. ^^  

[[ In Nomine Satanas ]]

I liked it, liked the first part more, but this is good too... You should take part in the Nanowrimo contest this coming month.  

[VirginSnake]

wow very interesting Z...

near the end though it says...
"She asked my..." I believe you hit a typo perhaps?  

[BlackHawkGS]

Wow.

The creepiness is off the hizzle. Fo' shizzle.

No tongue... I'd always wondered what that'd be like.  

[Rosealean]

This is very interesting to read, but also a bit creepy...

It's very good! ^_^