Prt. 4

[Xahmen]

There was a banging on the door; so intense I thought the wood would splinter and implode on me as I went to open it.

After that I lose any linear grip on what happened.
I was drugged, I know that much, because it all seems like transitions in a movie.

My apartment.
The trunk of a car (it smelled like piss and blood).
A warehouse on the pier, tied to a chair.

The cop was screaming in my face, yelling things like "tell me where she is" and "I'm gonna' kill you if you ******** her!"
The drugs are wearing off.


Oh s**t.... Oh s**t, I'm ******** cop was holding a knife.


Where did the girl go in the middle of the night?
She just vanished.

I tried not to think about the superficial things the cops was doing to me with the knife.
I tried to hide in my mind.
I failed.

God the pain was intense.

Intricate designs were emblazoned on my skin now, bleeding a dark crimson onto the dirty floor.  

[[ In Nomine Satanas ]]

I liked how he tried to block out the pain, to retreat into his mind, but failed.  

[KirbyVictorious]

what.....the hell?

No, seriously. This will noooooooooot end well. I wonder what's going on...why's the cop so obsessed over the girl? And why did she disappear?  

[Oukow]

Maybe she's a ghost.... o.O  

[VirginSnake]

o.o That cops messed! But I really like it! poor guy... nice wording. very nice *nods*  

[Gomenroia]

Maybe he's not even a cop...  

[KirbyVictorious]

maybe he's SATAN. O.O

No, that's being a little too cliched.  

[lucyVUITTON]

[ In Nomine Satanas ]

I liked how he tried to block out the pain, to retreat into his mind, but failed.

Me too.

This is a nice series of short stories you have going on here, Zahmen. Well done. You leave so many questions, which is a good thing, for a series.  

[Kattie]

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[ In Nomine Satanas ]

I liked how he tried to block out the pain, to retreat into his mind, but failed.

Me too.

And me! 3nodding

As always(or usually), Z, your short stories confuse me. And, as always, I can't wait to reading more to find out what happens next. This story is very interesting. Why is he pretending to be tongueless? Who is the girl? And why is the cop so...I dunno...weird?  

[Rosealean]

Wow....crazy cop....I want to know what happened with the girl, and what will happen to the main person that this is happening to....