A poem I wrote

[[Opheliac]]

The moon shines down on my face, wet by tears
Nothing matters, all I do is cry
Silent I scream out my pain, begging it to go away
But deep down inside I know you are the one
I cant go back
This is forever goodbye
Your eyes forever burned into my mind
The few times I was in your arms, never will I forgett
The remembrance of your smile
I´m broken..



If you don't understand what it's about. Don't bother.
If you understand it, you understand it.
Aight?  

[xXx.i.Am.Your.Angel.xXx]

i think it's beautiful & sad at the same time

i actually like it 3nodding  

[Godsmacks_Voodoo_Doll]

wow.. thats good. i love it. 3nodding  

[..Neko.Aimi..]

I think its very beautiful... Sad but beautiful.. and I understand it.  

[TheBloodICry]

Good  

[Paine_x]

It's sad, but I can see it expresses your feelings very well. You did a good job writing 3nodding  

[evie x core]

NutCaseFreak

The moon shines down on my face, wet by tears
Nothing matters, all I do is cry
Silent I scream out my pain, begging it to go away
But deep down inside I know you are the one
I cant go back
This is forever goodbye
Your eyes forever burned into my mind
The few times I was in your arms, never will I forgett
The remembrance of your smile
I´m broken..



If you don't understand what it's about. Don't bother.
If you understand it, you understand it.
Aight?

Oh My Goth! That is awesome. I love it!!!  

[Rellik San]

XxBunny.Marie.WayxX

NutCaseFreak

The moon shines down on my face, wet by tears
Nothing matters, all I do is cry
Silent I scream out my pain, begging it to go away
But deep down inside I know you are the one
I cant go back
This is forever goodbye
Your eyes forever burned into my mind
The few times I was in your arms, never will I forgett
The remembrance of your smile
I´m broken..



If you don't understand what it's about. Don't bother.
If you understand it, you understand it.
Aight?

Oh My Goth! That is awesome. I love it!!!

I've hurt people for much worse jokes.

Also... M-M-M-MOVED!  

[Tucker Tegato]

NutCaseFreak

The moon shines down on my face, wet by tears
Nothing matters, all I do is cry
Silent I scream out my pain, begging it to go away
But deep down inside I know you are the one
I cant go back
This is forever goodbye
Your eyes forever burned into my mind
The few times I was in your arms, never will I forgett
The remembrance of your smile
I´m broken..



If you don't understand what it's about. Don't bother.
If you understand it, you understand it.
Aight?

omg i love it do u mind if i show my friends at school... of course i'll tell them who it its by (you of course)