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Xahmen
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 3:37 pm
I woke up to the girl standing over me.
Heavy bandages were pulling me down and not letting me out of the cot I was in.

She looked completely sober, and for the first time I realized how pretty she was.

My breasts hurt, and with a sick dawning I understood that the cop had cut off my left n****e.

She told me that she had found me unconscious on the side of the road.

I whispered to her that I didn't know what type of trouble she was in, but thanks to her I was in it too.

The doctor entered; and he was holding a clipboard with various papers and what looked like x-rays tickered to it.

He told me it was all superficial damage, and that my rib would be fine.
I got a prescription for Zanex and Morphine.

Two days ago I could have made these myself.
He didn't want to hear that, he told me I wasn't to be doing much of anything.

I asked how much this was going to weigh on me.

He told me that the girl who brought me in paid for everything in advance.  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 3:39 pm
That's good, intriguing. Wonder where she got the money...  

[ In Nomine Satanas ]


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 3:41 pm
3nodding ditto.

wait...in advance? Meaning she knew itwould happen?  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 3:44 pm
Okay now I'm curious. We'll have to talk about this later on, Zee.  

broken_91


Xahmen
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 3:52 pm
Meh.

Long off duty time to pull everything together.

Felt m'ahself go a little insane.
Nicotine induced delirium.  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 8:49 pm
Nicotine=hiss.

If those dumbass people that smoke around me in whateveritscalled give me lung cancer, I'm removing their ability to speak(fluently)  

KirbyVictorious


Xahmen
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 12:06 pm
KirbyVictorious
Nicotine=hiss.

If those dumbass people that smoke around me in whateveritscalled give me lung cancer, I'm removing their ability to speak(fluently)

It's a hard habit to kick.

Anyways, Nicotine from the gum.

Not the smoking thing, not my jive.  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 6:24 pm
doesn't that gum supposedly taste like an ashtray?

Weird.

I swear I was an elf in a parallel universe. I hate smoke. /pollution. /forest fires.  

KirbyVictorious

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