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Risolution

PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 7:10 am


Ok! here it is! My ACTUAL art thread I usually just post art here in the Chibi War thread, but Now I've decided to actually place a regular art thread which I will actually update! *gasp*

Ok I need really need crit, but comments are appreciated

*Note These pictures where drawn before I was corrected on my arm length problem*

These were all drawn from september 8th to present day




There are MANY more pictures that were drawn between Sept 8 and now, but there are the most presentable.....

*Update as of 11/13/06~*
New Picture!
Meet....Wiley!
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 8:33 am


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Hmm, pretty good, the only thing I really see that could be improved is that you should work on your proportions a bit. Not any major flaws but Ivanna Weinershnitzel pic her hands and arms look a bit off, and in Irai the neck looks a bit thin.

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Risolution

PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 4:18 pm


Update! New Picture! done just a few minutes ago! It's practically still fresh!

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:20 am


Ummm.... why are they all in the same profile image? For better results and faster improvement please draw the characters that screams out their personalities. Their names won't stick in our minds, but what will would be exactly what you're trying to portray with them.

I particularly like the chibi picture and the person from the back. Mainly because these two stand out much more than any of the other pictures. It's not just the composition itself, but the content I like the most. It's probably the leaves in the wind, and the fact that you don't need to worry about hands and such with chibi.

Honestly, I've never been a big fan of furries, but I'll give it a shot.

You tend to hide the hands because you don't know how to draw them properly. Is this correct? Please tell me if I'm wrong.

The one with the blue fur is no doubt your best piece. It's not because I have a bias against digital arts and such, I just think you did that overall the best. The use of colors is subtle, but it works, and not just that, you have definite folds on the clothing.

Miss Four-Pack is my least favorite however, She seriously could use some work. I take it that this was probably done around the beginning of your timeline so I will not pass "judgment" on it. =P

Anyhow, keep up the good work and continue to improve. How long have you been drawing?

AkiraBirtron


Risolution

PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 3:26 am


I started drawing back when pokemon first came out..but it was nothing more than pokeballs and the occasional pikachu. It wasn't until 9th 7th grade when I really got into it. Thank you very much for your input Akira. I would appreciate it if you would elaborate on that first statement. And true...I do hide the hands for that reason...I can't really draw them correctly, so I hide them T.T

Wait..could your first statement have something to do with poses perhaps?
PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 10:44 pm


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I started drawing back when pokemon first came out..but it was nothing more than pokeballs and the occasional pikachu. It wasn't until 9th 7th grade when I really got into it. Thank you very much for your input Akira. I would appreciate it if you would elaborate on that first statement. And true...I do hide the hands for that reason...I can't really draw them correctly, so I hide them T.T

Wait..could your first statement have something to do with poses perhaps?


Not just different poses, but also deeply contrasting features that really, truly set them apart from one another. I know that the species is one thing, but facial and body structure is very important as well.

Practice using your own hands as reference. Sit there and use one hand to pose, and the other to draw it. It takes LOTS of practice to get it right, and be sure to use other references as well.

I hope this is helpful.

AkiraBirtron

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