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Not bad, the hair lacks detail though, like lines that show its not just a solid mass and also show the direction the hair is going. The hair is still going under the eye, which looks really wierd >_o

The pose is nice and active, however! Its good to get used to poses instead of limp, inactive, couch potato poses.

The feathers of the wings at the top just need to be joined and not seperated out with lines though, it looks like they are on top of each other like layers instead of part of the same wing.

I like the fishnet too!

thanks guys. yeah, this drawing was drawn around the same time the first one was, but the eye-hair situation looks a little better in this one.

and thanks for all the other comments ^.^