broken love

[Im_a_lost_cause]

you said you didnt want me,
you left without a sound
into the never ending forest
no where to be found.
i cant believe you left me
my heart will never mend
im still waiting in vain
for this nightmare to end
i now know your gone
that much is clear
but i still cant help myself
from wishing you were here. emo  

[Envy__Sin]

Though I may not like rhyming poetry, this one was good <-- I think the reason why I like some of other peoples, and not my own, is because I cant rhyme very well. Some of the lines were a bit off - the beat got a bit messed up with some words - but other than that, good job. Going through a hard time?

 

[`Yayoru Mishizaki]

its a very nice poem keep up the good work ^^  

[TrueNamu]

I'm impressed.Very good.Keep up the good work and you'll be great.  

[BLOoDy RoMAnCEs]

ever read twilight and new moon. it remeinds me of how bella feels when edward leaves.  

[Im_a_lost_cause]

BLOoDy RoMAnCEs

ever read twilight and new moon. it remeinds me of how bella feels when edward leaves.

YES! IM IN LOVE WITH YOU!!!!!
sorry. redface i love that book. i cant wait till eclipse comes out and thats where i got the idea for my poem!!!!!!!