My first poem..

[x0_blink182_0x]

Hey. This is my first poem. I hope you like it. Be brutally honest.
Okay, here I go..

*LEFT EMØTIØNLESS*

A road that’s dark and lonely.
A heart that’s black and cold.
A girl who’s lost and forgotten.
A home that’s silent and old.

A smile that's broken and confused.
A girl who's drowning in sorrow.
I can't always say,
It's going to be better tomorrow.

A friendship that once was there,
Now has been misplaced.
A girl left standing with no one,
Has taken that friendships place.

A field beneath dark clouds.
Empty space surrounded by nothing.
An angel, whose wings have been torn,
Has been left behind with no one, with nothing.

Betrayal,
Denial.
Sorrow,
Hate.

Rage,
Desire.
Rejection,
Grief.

A school that’s abandoned and quite,
A promise that’s broken and lifeless.
A friendship that’s destroyed and gone,
A girl who’s guilty with lies.

A twisting path to nowhere,
Everything is motionless.
A girl walking all alone,
Feeling completely emotionless.

A bed that remains un-touched,
A bed-room door that remains shut.
A girl left broken hearted,
Doesn’t know where she belongs.

A family portrait on the ground shattered,
A family vacation that's now cancelled.
A girl left without a mother,
Who died when the girl was 8.

Mourn,
Pray.
Laugh,
Cry.

Yell,
Scream.
Swear,
Die.  

[Gambino Statue]

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[Yeah That STD]

That Is THE BEST Poem I Have Ever Read!  

[miss_zita]

wow really good, better than any poem i've ever writen  

[SUMMERWlNE]

I love it! i like the rhyming and the feelings.  

[SoBloodxSilkoS]

It sounds really good ^_^  

[[. Negative Exposure .]]

[-Ohman, that's so good!!-]]