[F-4] Monochromatic Angel

[Mint Thimble]

THis is a picture I finished last week and had been working on for... probably between 10-15 hours. It goes with a story I created (titled "Monochromatic Angel").

THe large DA version:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/44171400/
The smaller DA version:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/44171906/
The smallest version (Photobucket):
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/Mie-chan/a-16.jpg


Some things I am disatisfied with/would like to pull some attention to:

--The man in the back's head. It was supposed to look like he was laying down (or perhaps standing up with his head back), but I don't think I acheived this.
--The woman (on the right side). I just... don't like her body. It seems kinda stumpy and flabby. Lately, drawing women's bodies has been a challenge for me... >>;;;
--THe hand gripping the cord. It's just looks... wierd (to me, at least).

Please keep in mind that the original picture is about 15'x11', so the line going down it is the scanner's fault, not mine (had to scan it in two pieces).



Also... if you've ever seen my other art, you'll know that this is nothing like my usual cutesy stuff. xD;;; *points at sig*  

[Mint Thimble]

Eh? No comments? =(  

[menen]

dude thats some fine drawing right there its like dude...your a frikn artist  

[Captain Sporkie Pie]

Ohhh nice work! I like how the colours contrast with each other!

The guy in the background looks like he is standing (or hovering, concidering he has wings xd ) with his head turned upwards. If that was what you were aiming for (I wasn't sure), well you acheived it in my point of view ^__^

The woman on the right's leg are out of proportion. The anatomy for them is wrong. One is thiner than the other, and they are weird shapes.

And the hand griping the cord, the second in from the right (your right) is the only one that is good anatomy wise. The first on the left is alittle too fat, the one next it, the curve at the end slants to the left and the first on the right, the part of the finger curving over the cord is alittle to close to the cord. It makes that finger look very thin in the place.

I would do a red line, but i wouldn't be able to do one well for the leg anatomy on the woman. Apart from that, I hope I have helped.

Keep it up! Your have talent! heart  

[nite elf]

its good, real good  

[AesopsFabled]

it's awsome! i love it!

burning_eyes i've had too much coffee! burning_eyes  

[Laugh Once In A Red Moon]

You still need to change a couple of things, but it's really good other wise.