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Me with My Broken Wings

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Hikaru Akumu

PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 6:15 pm

Mmm...This is one of my poems. Feh. decided to do seperate threads for each one now. -rolls- Enjoy.

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I had Fallen.

Fallen so Quickly

beneath the sky where

my dreams used to lie

where I wanted to be when I died.

They had decided to

Snip my wings.

They had decided to

Take my freedom from me.

THey had decided to

Bind me to the ground.

They had decided to

send me away from my dreams.

But No

No No

No

I won't let that happen.

I won't let them know that

I won't let them take away

what I've worked so hard for till today.

They Don't know that

I know how to live.

They don't know that

I know how to be free.

They don't know that

I know how to be Me.

They don't know that

I'm taking back my broken wings.

I'm taking back

my lonely wings

tonight.

I'm taking back

my freedom they took from me.

I'm taking back the life that

they bound to the ground.

I'm becoming me.

No No

No No

They don't know that

I know how to Live.

They don't know that

I know how to be free.

They don't know that

I know how to be me.

I am taking back

My black broken wings.

I am sewing them back

to my wingless back.

I will let them see

the blood run down my back

I will let them know

I am Me with my broken wings.

I am me with my broken wings.

I am

ME with my Broken Wings.

With my Broken Wings.



They don't know that

I know how to live

They don't know that

I know how to be free

They don't know that

I am me

With my broken wings.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 4:07 pm
That's really good , it's sound like one of the poem i've made =D  

-Dotted-Delete


Emo Attack

PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:58 pm
I like it!  
PostPosted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 12:05 pm
you write with a chest of steel

and a cotton heart
 

wildfiresdeath


e x m o t i o n a l

PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 10:47 am
That reads like a song.
You should give it a tune.

<3 cat
 
PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 12:36 pm

...A Simple Misunderstanding...

Why, Thank you. :]
It does have a tune to it actually...
I'm just too lazy to go make it work with my friends guitar.
><;;
Thanks for your comments!


...Lead to my Fall...
 

Hikaru Akumu

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