This is surprising. Wasnt sure how real and how fictional I wanted to take this. But the balance was perfect to me. Not so much detail that it was all you concentrated on, but not so little your own imagination ran off and you could not finish this piece. And even before you said it was a true story..
I had a feeling that it could have been. It is a subtle fact that mny do not think about. But it happens. You just brought it to life in all our minds.
Great piece of Writing Zahmen.