The Smile.

[Xahmen]

Born from a little girl's pearly teeth I wake up.
The day is brighter than I imagined it would be; but until a moment ago I didn't exist so maybe my newly acquired imagination is rampant.

I see other people, and more of my kind gently resting on their lips as they looked upon me and my button-nosed creator. I feel like a king among kings.

Life is longer than anything I've ever experienced, each second feels like a year; I grow old and content.

My brother Laughter slips past me and steals my thunder, but I love him anyways. Hearing him makes me feel better about myself and I think it shows because my maker starts laughing again as people coo at her adorable-ness.

What's this mass I see before my prescence?
The girl's mind screams the word "Cake".

What?!
Wait what are you doing?!

Darlene no!

Oh.... God now I'm covered in some sticky substance that appears to be a purple color.

The light in the sky is fading.
People are leaving.

I don't feel good.
I feel drained.

How old is this universe of mine, six?
How long can a six year old stay smiling?

Fu-  

[Voxxx]

xp I didn't expect that to be so funny. The imagery is striking- I love the use of "button-nosed."  

[Xahmen]

You're Kirby's friend right?
Never introduced myself, I'm Zahmen, and I'm a mod here.

Thank's for the compliment on the story.  

[Voxxx]

Yep! ^^ Just Kirby's crazy friend. I'm Voxxxie, and um, I'm new. xp

Nice to meet you!  

[shortstoriestragicendings]

that was great
I enjoyed it  

[NovaKing]

Wait so what was born? ( sorry its late here * shrugs* )


edit: oh the smile. --_--

double edit: It was lovely by the way. How ever did you think of it?  

[lidless_i]

Interesting... I'd say more about it, but I'm not much of a critic... I acctually had to think a little bit because I didn't associate the title with the contents of it at first. It was good, though.  

[NovaKing]

Forgive me, but i hardly ever get to use this epigram:

A story is as long as it needs to be.



I wonder though.... could this be a poem as well?  

[Merenwen99]

That's awesome! I was thinking it was going to be some . . . well, that doesn't really matter because it wasn't. That was hillarious! Good job. I think the element of surprise helped a bit too.  

[KirbyVictorious]

Oooh, funny! ^^

I liked it.

What was the fu for though? xd