It's a prince and his bodyguard.

[xtoo many unicornsx]

My sketch is done! Um, I know the girl's arms are too long and the guns lack butts. Don't even go there. sweatdrop

Also on Deviantart if you prefer to comment there:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/46063978/  

[Tsuyumi Riko]

This is a very pretty sketch. The faces are proportional. They look like they're facing the right way. I have nothing against their head (face, hair and all).

The only thing I don't like is the girl's left arm. For some reason it looks too long to be proportional to her right arm. Either that or the scan's missing some details that'll make it look better.

Besides that, your sketch's really perfect. I'd give it a 8/10 just because you haven't inked or coloured it =)  

[xtoo many unicornsx]

rimu_kori

This is a very pretty sketch. The faces are proportional. They look like they're facing the right way. I have nothing against their head (face, hair and all).

The only thing I don't like is the girl's left arm. For some reason it looks too long to be proportional to her right arm. Either that or the scan's missing some details that'll make it look better.

Besides that, your sketch's really perfect. I'd give it a 8/10 just because you haven't inked or coloured it =)

Naw, that arms looks too long in the sketch, too. I'm glad you caught that before I inked (traditional media= gonk ). Thank you! heart  

[Garkudion]

You'll need to get a better picture of it. It's quite sketchy and I'm not sure if the mistakes I see will be fixed or at least...covered. When the artwork is done and a better image is uploaded..I'll critique !  

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Garkudion

You'll need to get a better picture of it. It's quite sketchy and I'm not sure if the mistakes I see will be fixed or at least...covered. When the artwork is done and a better image is uploaded..I'll critique !

But that's the best my scanner could pick up. Seriously, I had to up the contrast and lower the brightness considerably to get even this amount of detail. The lines that look broken are closed. And, well, when I'm finished it will be too late. Since I work in traditional media, I can't mess with the lineart after I'm done, so I really need to know now if I'm going to fix anything. This is pretty much a finished sketch, once I make the girl's far arm shorter I'll ink it.

And, well, it's a sketch. So it's sketchy. sweatdrop Can't say much about that.  

[AesopsFabled]

i like it to me theres nothing wrong with it. it's very good, better than what i can do just ink and color and you've got an awsome picture!  

[xtoo many unicornsx]

smelyondra

i like it to me theres nothing wrong with it. it's very good, better than what i can do just ink and color and you've got an awsome picture!

Thanks. heart I just inked it, so now all I need to do is erase the pencil and color it.  

[-Hydrogenated-Bee-]

I love your style, the coloring, how it all just looks perfect, etc.

I didn't even notice the guns didn't have butts, till you pointed it out, and I agree with you on the girl's arms, but other wise, it's a 10/10!

I hope you will post a revised version of this picture, I look forward to seeing it!

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[xtoo many unicornsx]

Trisha-Bee

I love your style, the coloring, how it all just looks perfect, etc.

I didn't even notice the guns didn't have butts, till you pointed it out, and I agree with you on the girl's arms, but other wise, it's a 10/10!

I hope you will post a revised version of this picture, I look forward to seeing it!

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heart Thanks! I can't really revise it, though, since it's traditional media. sweatdrop I could white out parts of the lineart, but coloring over the white out would be a disaster. gonk  

[tremle]

it's pretty good domokun
about the lineart, the only thing that's kind of 'ehh..' i the girl's arms. i mean, they are the right length, but the left one seems to be folded rather painfully and the right one seems a bit too angular (the hands need to be a little bigger as well)  

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tremle

it's pretty good domokun
about the lineart, the only thing that's kind of 'ehh..' i the girl's arms. i mean, they are the right length, but the left one seems to be folded rather painfully and the right one seems a bit too angular (the hands need to be a little bigger as well)

Thanks for the critique. heart Yep, I have trouble with limbs. gonk  

[Tsuyumi Riko]

waii~~~ you've coloured it domokun heart heart

I'll go comment at DA. XD