Poetry?

[Motomina]

hear the sound of morning breeze,
as the sun would rise up with ease,
the big red dog slays the big red cat,
and the big red cat slays the big fat rat.  

[kyoslove74]

I admire her she is from the movie my wife is a gangster

ok any ways

Lost in the flow
Things lost in time
Suppressing paid off
memories fading away
death happends
it wasn't known
2 months of no knowledge
pain
suppressing the feelings
lost in the flow again  

[mymiridon]

a breeze-y wind blows
underneath a shady tree
We dream together


I like haikus and they fell nice 3nodding  

[Corvius]

I'm not too good a poetry. I think its kind of like something that you are born with. That you're born with being able to put your thoughts and feelings down in writing and doing it well. I've only made one or two good ones in my life sweatdrop ...  

[Motomina]

XShadowMistressX

Hello, this is a place to post your poetry or comment on one anothers.
I guess I'll post one of mine:

Life-Sized Doll

You bound me with invisible thread
You washed my body as I dyed the water red

You danced with me alone
You whispered to me as my body turned cold as stone

You tilted my head back to see my face
Your eyes left mine erased

You made me into glass and porcelain
And wrapped me up in human skin

You played with me, limp in your arms
You swore to me that you?d keep me safe from harm

You laid me down on the beach by your side
And wiped away tears as I cried

You held me in your hands
You let my blood run red across white sands

--...quite a lot of blood... but other then that i like the rhyming! heart