My Poem please comment

[Zakuro700]

Each day she thinks I hate myself and I want to die.
Then a knife in the air.
She welcomes the blade.
And with one regret she screams goodbye.
Her life fades.
Her regret unknown.
With one question in everyones mind.
Why?  

[Emo Girlgamer]

so sad i loved it  

[Ieri Aedile]

I thought it was good just a little to free form for my tastes