a poem i wrote

[CHAOSOUL3]

my life is full of deppression
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im a failyer u should know
im full of the h8tred that people show
im turning more lonely as i grow
im crying these tears that melt the snow
im hurting inside as i write this now
im hopeing you will help the poor souls that know how  

[-Isel-]

This bothers me. Like a corpse left unburied, that's the bother I'm feeling.

Please eliminate this filth.  

[Gambino Statue]

Constructive Criticism: 'failyer' and 'h8tred' aren't making a statement. They're just wrong.  

[Mortal Apparition]

Really good man...Just that the speeling erros looks kinda awkward...