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BlackHawkGS

PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 5:17 pm
(Sorta a continuation off of the other post. Since this just happened in my life and I'm gettin' pissed...)

Brian: What happen?

What? You aren't suppose to read those.

Brian: Well I just did, BIATCH.

Oh hush. Where's your smarter and far more appealing brother?

Spyke: You call?

Yes. I'm pissed.

Spyke: Oh, that's a first for '07. Why and who?

That Brittany girl I thought I was about to go out with. Turns out she "found out she had a chance with two other boys."

Spyke: Ouch. So you're basically dumped before even going out?

Yaaa...

Brian: Sounds like you need to get away from marching band people!

... actually, Brian, you have a good point.

Spyke: Wow, never thought I'd hear that.

Brian: Neither did I!

But really, I'm sick of being a frickin' back-up boyfriend. This happened with another girl I was really dating and about to ask out, until she also "found out this one boy liked her." Sure enough, they started going out a few days later.

Brian: My senses detect another devilish marching band woman!?

Ya. But she went to a different school. So that sorta-

Brian: No. It's official. You're getting away from all marching band people.

Spyke: Agreed. Nothing good has ever come out of hanging around with girls in the marching band cult.

But... I really liked her.

Brian: Ya, and I really like Mudkip. BUT DO YOU SEE WHAT BECAME OF THAT!?!?

Spyke: ... Brian, your moment to shine ended a few minutes ago.

Brian: Curses.

Well, ya. Guess I'll be waiting for someone. Might even write something worthwhile in the meantime.

Brian: Write another Wingless! I wanna see what awesome things I do this time!

Spyke: And you better turn me back into that demonic super-saiyan thing or whatever it was.

Heh... guess I will.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 7:32 pm
wow you cant tell by looking but its actually quite sophisticated as far as dialog and human nature go ( most of it anyways.) some of the the dialog you can tell is a transferance of your nature onto the other boys but the other stuff stays well hindden with the nature of boydom [not quite sure how to spell that made up word]

I think you used spyke as your reasoning side and brian as a transferance of observed human nature.

even if that analysis is wrong or any of that stuff you put in was unintentional; the fact remains that i enjoyed it.

[this is actually one of the first works ive seen from you...odd, but enjoyable.]  

NovaKing


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 9:29 pm
Lol, noob.

(that was sarcasm)

I'm a marching band person. (snare). Do I count as a person you shouldn't hang around with?

Cause I'm a Hawk fangirl, and we don't use you for backup. ^^ 3nodding that's what Ross is for... ninja

(he totally has the hots for me. i ignore him)  
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