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HopelessRomantic44

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Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 4:33 pm


	Ohhh, you are a scandalous one. The p***s really threw me off.. Hmm, I must comprehend this... ...

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 8:55 pm


	The first one is choppy in the second stanza. You might want to make line 7 shorter to flow better.

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