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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 7:00 pm
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Glancing, fleeting, hoping What is this shitty attachment? Tired feet Lungs failing Content eyes Too many coincidences My pride can hide a little longer
Chancing, passing, nothing This collar is strangling This weak thread leash binding Dragging a weary dog down Unnoticed
Muted Blinded Deafened My eyes turn gray My pride can hide a little longer
Color A curious blue Shadow-rimmed meets gray Chains shake
My pride can’t hide any longer
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Not worth much, I know. It sounds unfinished and confused well, because it is. But hey, it's how I'm feeling. As corny as that was, I'll let the horrendous comments come now. Critique please.
Time, nothing but a hindrance To the secrets that you hide Whispers I can't grab Though countless times I try Natural, you surely aren't Flawed, you may be I cannot think of reasons why You make me smile so
A shadow of sharp words Rain drops in the city Of nice-yties, I am not Just flesh soon to rot, to be forgotten I can clearly see, through the flames, my fog I am the reasons why You run, and cry, for all eternity
----------------------------- Something that needed to be released before heads began to roll.
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 10:22 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 4:17 am
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 1:37 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 1:53 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 2:53 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 7:19 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 9:17 am
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 3:44 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:03 pm
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