I Was You ((poetry))

[Prince Lithium]

::I Was You::

So far from me
I can hear you sing
So far from me
I want to hear everything

Holding me down
I know it's no dream
Holding me down
"Please don't scream"

Waking my distant fears
I know why it's there
Waking my distant fears
I know that you don't care

So far from me
I now see the light
So far from me
I know something's not right

Holding me down
You laugh at what's inside
Holding me down
The pressure is enough to cry

Waking my distant fears
I toss them back at you
Waking my distant fears
I know that I was you


((comments are loved))  

[Surami-Fox]

Pretty good. I like the repeating of lines.  

[CHOKETRENDKILL]

. . .
I love it.
Kinda scared me at first. .

 

[rockrgirl01]

I like it 7/10