Another teenage angst poem... **sighs**

[Saikiyoumi]

No matter what you say, I wrote this poem with my heart due to some life problems.... so dont even bother trying to tell me "this is s**t". get it? got it? good.

I'm there again,
a crimson knife in my hand,
regret staining the rug at my feet,
repeat, repeat.

She told me I was abused,
But I didn't believe her.
She said I wa sbeing used,
Infact I called her a liar.

Now I see,
That we can not be,
With out you hurting,
My heart and me.

Repeat Repeat.

You told me that you loved me,
You said you would never let go,
And I always said the same,
Because back then I didnt't know.

I didn't realize
that you didn't mean
a single ******** word
you ever said.

So I'm sorry I'm not perfect,
I'm sorry that I cry,
I'm sorry I'm not pretty
I'm sorry I can't just die.

But you're not worth it,
no longer will I take it,
No longer will I take your lies
Because you are nothing in my eyes.

Repeat! Repeat!  

[-Isel-]

Well, I like it better than some of the other bile I've seen lately...  

[Saikiyoumi]

any one else?  

[Rellik San]

I'm assuming its about you and your boyfriend breaking up?

I really thought it was going to be more of the same, the usual self pitying crap I read here, instead, I get that until the last verse, where suddenly there is this burst of hope about you taking charge of your emotions and not letting the actions of someone... I assume was less then pleasant to you. So well done, you are one of the few people that reminded me of why I had the old owner set this place up. smile  

[A.Box.Of.Sharp.Objects]

Rellik San

I'm assuming its about you and your boyfriend breaking up?

I really thought it was going to be more of the same, the usual self pitying crap I read here, instead, I get that until the last verse, where suddenly there is this burst of hope about you taking charge of your emotions and not letting the actions of someone... I assume was less then pleasant to you. So well done, you are one of the few people that reminded me of why I had the old owner set this place up. smile

Yeah I liked the little end part. It worked well  

[assumingtheworst]

Better than anything I can write. Sigh....