hypocrite...what he says to me

[Artemis_The_Slayer]

i say go
i tell the girl no
but she refuses
the attempts are useless
i tell him make her go
but all he says is no
so she stays
i love him alot
he is all that i got
she hits on him
my kindness goes dim
i scream leave us be
just him i only need
i messed up in the past
the yelling happend so fast
i say to him make it stop
he says then why did YOU not
my feelings are nothing of importance
because then i will be a hypocrite....  

[Artemis_The_Slayer]

so.... nobody cares hu?  

[Artemis_The_Slayer]

would someone comment and just pretend that I matter.....  

[Artemis_The_Slayer]

WOULD SOMEONE REPLY DAMMNIT!!!!

emo  

[Artemis_The_Slayer]

....im gonna quit this friggin guild...
ive had this up for more than a month.....  

[-Isel-]

Get the ******** over yourself.

I'll give you points for semi-intelligent approximate rhymes. No verses, though, it's just one constant chunk...

Oh, e. e. cummings, your wild ways with free verse have birthed many that abuse the style.  

[Alxied]

It's very hard to follow it, it jumps back and forth so much. I give you props for a couple strong words. Overall, an OK poem. Keep going!