emoetry by accidentally (( total of 3 ))

[accidentallyonpurpose]

A wingless bird

In this cold, unfaithful night,
Only one thing gives flight,
Although it has no wings.
The hopeless song
“I won’t be long,
To this world and other things.”
It lifts its beak.
As though to speak,
But nothing comes out, you see
Because the other thing
That it cannot sing
Is you and me, my friend.



The beast of mankind


It runs amok
Among us.
It walks along
Beside us.
It speaks and hears
Just like us.
The beast I speak of
Is us.

Love


In a cold winter world
It finally unfurled
Searching, that second, for prey
It caught you in sights
And lit up the lights
In my mind, my eyes, my heart
The beast I have inside
Is nothing to hide
For it is a thing called love


pls comment^^ ill luv u 4evr if u do 4laugh

 

[xXxAllThatsLeftxXx]

Those are good. I like the rythm and the way you portray the subject. They are short but straight to the point. ^_^ I give you 11.  

[xXxAllThatsLeftxXx]

Oh yeah. And I just read your response. I want to see tears in your poetry, and emotion. Ok? Cause I don't see it.  

[xXxAllThatsLeftxXx]

I know you aren't making fun of my post.

pls comment^^ ill luv u 4evr if u do 4laugh

Yeah. I take back what I posted earlier. I'm just too lazy to delete them. Do you love me now? huh? I will refrain from calling you names at the moment.  

[accidentallyonpurpose]

hey P.A. what? are you pmsing? or are you just depressed? jeez!! i dont love you! it was an axaggeration, a*****e!!