Islanzadi's First Drawing; Need Critique

[islanzadidrottning]

Hi! This is my first scanned drawing; I've been seriously drawing for a year now. Could you guys give me some critique? Please and thank you!

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r312/islanzadidesalas/scan001001.jpg  

[4a5dgfad]

its good, but the something about the shoulders..ones too high perhaps? The head looks a bit long, you might wanna make it a bit shorter, and it would be great once u start working on the face...if you want to though...the hips seem to be a bit wide...or is that just me? well i hope that helped..and didnt make things worse...well umm..ima stop talking now...  

[islanzadidrottning]

XxrandumbnessxX

its good, but the something about the shoulders..ones too high perhaps? The head looks a bit long, you might wanna make it a bit shorter, and it would be great once u start working on the face...if you want to though...the hips seem to be a bit wide...or is that just me? well i hope that helped..and didnt make things worse...well umm..ima stop talking now...

Thank you for your comments.......I gave up drawing faces on figure drawings a while ago........and I could distinguishing those lines. She's supposed to have a figure.  

[4a5dgfad]

well u just dont get better on anything if u give up, give another go at the face...and yeah i c what u mean about the figure..ok well good luck on anything u might be drawing soon  

[nite elf]

the way i see it is you just need to refine the details  

[fumetsu ookami]

I like the outfit on her and I suggest keep practicing instead of giving up who knows maybe that would be your best part of the picture if you get better 3nodding  

[KiyoshiKyokai]

If you can get this far, it's time to move on to inking/coloring and so forth. It's difficult to judge your skill and its strong/weak points based on this rough sketch alone. Can you show us a more finished work?