"an emo's picture"

[TEE WAS HERE]

this is a poem i wrote a while back... tell me what you think.

an emo's picture

i'm.gonna.draw
think.it.with.a.saw
it'll.be.drawn.with.a.twist
right.upon.my.wrist

 

[The Raining Soul]

It's well....Short....But pretty good...  

[Dave Dave]

Shi-Tsuki

this is a poem i wrote a while back... tell me what you think.

an emo's picture

i'm.gonna.draw
think.it.with.a.saw
it'll.be.drawn.with.a.twist
right.upon.my.wrist

I don't mean to be rude, but I've seen lines 1, 3, and 4 before. And 2 might be an alteration I don't know, but nice poem nonetheless.  

[Blue_Mascara]

I have heard this too many times for me to believe you actually wrote it.  

[A Kiss Goodbye]

lol Somebody else posted the same poem in this same forum.  

[santaslilangel]

Your poem was amazing..short but it I felt what you were saying.