"addiction"

[TEE WAS HERE]

-a-smoke-to-show-the-fame-
-a-purge-to-stop-the-gain-
-a-pill-to-win-the-game-
-a-drink-to-numb-the-shame-
-a-shot-to-kill-the-pain-
-a-cut-to-break-the-vein-
-an-addict's-life-is-lame-
-is-your-life-the-same-?-

i wrote this with one of my friends....
somebody said my other poem.. ,"an emo's picture", was too short... hope this one is better
 

[BeckytheGoat]

it's pretty good.

i can imagine someone reciting this
in some kinda local coffee shop kinda thing...  

[Silver Wingling]

BeckytheGoat

it's pretty good.

i can imagine someone reciting this
in some kinda local coffee shop kinda thing...

Yes, very coffee shopesque.  

[A Kiss Goodbye]

Is that all you people care about? How you'd look reciting poetry in a coffee shop?

Anyway, the poem is good, or was good up until the last two lines. They ruined it for me. Though your "emo's picture" poem was stolen, so I can't imagine this is your's, too.  

[KeEp-My-CaSkEt-ClOsEd !]

That poem reminds me of my friend...shes like that....

I love it.  

[xKaitlynxKrunkx]

I like :3

 

[TEE WAS HERE]

A Kiss Goodbye

Is that all you people care about? How you'd look reciting poetry in a coffee shop?

Anyway, the poem is good, or was good up until the last two lines. They ruined it for me. Though your "emo's picture" poem was stolen, so I can't imagine this is your's, too.

*sigh* tsuki hasn't been on this guild for a while... TT 3 TT tht's mean.... tsuki doesn't care anymore... the "emo's picture" was written by tsuki. tsuki did not copy any ******* person. and tht's tht. don't care if you don't believe tsuki. but. this poem is by tsuki and one of her best friends. tht's all. *runs to a corner and starts cutting away.* now stfu. plz. (*^~^*)