Everyone says this poem is quite beautiful. Opinions?

[xWilted Heartx]

Uhm..ok.. let's see how this works:

My favorite color is black,
It's my heart's favorite too...
In a second, my whole world can change from happy to blue.

Buy some stitches for my broken heart,
it's proof two people can be torn apart..
I walk along an empty rode,
For which I paved for which I know.

There is where my dreams fall apart,
There is where my depression starts,
That is why my tears are sorrow,
That is why my happiness won't start till tommorow.

I wake up in an empty room,
I then know hope can start too soon.
Under my bed lies a key,
A key that holds happy possibilities.

As you may already know,
That key stays there-
Through rain and snow...

Because, my life bends,
Yet my life aches..
But my life can't take it-
When my heart must break

~ xWilted Heartx  

[The Raining Soul]

omg I love this poem...  

[assumingtheworst]

it's good.  

[[Ashes][is][Ashes]]

Fix your spelling and punctuation. Maybe then I'll consider critiquing it, or rather, giving you my opinion.