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[Jayta Kimioji]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12650656/ this is a title i made for an rpg im making and i was wanting to get some pointers or tips to how i could make it beter sweatdrop  

[Chisa]

Hey there! Nice title, I just think that at the moment it looks a bit plain. There's a lot of empty space in the bottom left hand corne; I'd suggest moving the crystal up next to the text and cropping the whole image, or filling the extra space with something else, an illustration of one of the characters of your RPG perhaps?

Also, I think a more interesting font would work better for the text, particularly the 'Mystic Tale' part, to make it stand out more and go with the fantasy theme.  

[Jayta Kimioji]

what type of font do u suggest  

[Better of Two Evils]

www.dafont.com has lots.  

[Chisa]

Singrea

what type of font do u suggest

I'd suggest a scripty or calligraphic font for the 'Mystic Tale' part, and a plainish serifs font for the other part.

Umm thats just a suggestion though, I'm not sure how it would work out sweatdrop  

[Keitaro Masaya]

I suggest you silloute*sp8 the crystal and make it have some fighters in front of it also sillouted  

[Jayta Kimioji]

sp8?  

[hello hoshi]

If you have Photoshop, you can try putting that crystal on a different layer and trying to emboss it in some way. Or else make two layers of the crystal, embossing the top layer and then setting it's mode to something that makes the crystal look a bit more like a crystal >w<

It looks pretty though biggrin Just, I think the crystal should look a little more 3D-ish. Yea :3  

[Raine Dragon]

I would say try to make the crystal stand out without adding the dark shadow. Also, try to use the space better, right now, you have a large empty spot.

ways to fill it:
*add other shapes
*add a long cast shaddow from the crystal, but keep in mind, it must be light...
*perhaps add something for the crystal to de sitting on...  

[Wolven Lurker]

Heh, I would say more cystals or made throw in a animation and make crystal sparkle