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 Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 1:05 pm
 Like 'em? ^.^ please critique.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 9:03 pm
An interesting picture. I'm just going to point out a few things. First off, the shading is a bit messy and bumpy, and often in the incorrect places. I'd suggest looking at actual clothing/feathers for reference. What bothers me most in the pic is her hand on his shoulder. It's missing joints and not all fingers are of the same length. Again, look for real references. I'd retouch on anatomy in general. His left arm is about half the length of his right. Sorry for sounding a bit harsh, but I like the effort. Group pictures are much harder than a single person portrait ^^
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 5:52 am
TUVM. Originally, in the rough draft, the angels hand did have joints. I have photoshop 5.0, and apparently I have no idea how to use it lol. I darken all of the lines in it using the brush tool, and sometimes I just get fed up with it and I mess something up and leave it. lol. I have anger issues.
As for the arm, I didn't even catch that. Thank you for pointig that out.
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 2:35 am
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:53 am
its a nice start keep working at it and you might have a great picture
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