The Weaver of Dreams

[Anestshia]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3656875/1/The_Weaver_of_Dreams

This is one of the fanfictions i have online, i started it but i dun know if i'm going to finish it because no one has been reviewing it, if you read it please tell me what you think.

 

[Luamervara]

It would help if you link it directly from the story itself rather than the preview that way you'd get more foot traffic from here.  

[Anestshia]

ok, i just put up the wrong link, now it is.

 

[chibihotachan]

I've only had time to read the first two sections, but so far I love it and can't wait to read more! The feelings and scenes discribed are so vivid and you seemed to have nailed each personality. I did find one part a litle awkward and it's really subtle. When the scouts first enter the hospital room and it says that Darien is holding the hand of his "girlfriend" it doesn't really portray the depth of the realasionship or the fact that they are engaged which happened at the begining of Stars. I'm not entirely sure when this story takes place but since Lita's wearing a blue school skirt and Mina is at the same schol it would have to be after Stars right (not to mention Hotaru is not an infant). Great job heart heart heart