My poem

[Caity9117]

I walk these halls
and pass you by
You dont even think to ask me why

Ignoring me
is what you do
This to me is nothing new

As i look at you
i must turn away
Never knowing What to say...

I wrote this a while ago and i think i will add a few more uhhh i think there called stanzas
Post if u like it smile
if u dont than go away stare  

[carmen45]

nice poem i liked it alot. i get ignord too  

[[Ashes][is][Ashes]]

Please, capitalize your i's.
stare
And a LOT of people are ignored in this subforum.  

[The Raining Soul]

Ashes is right... stare

Either way, you just need to be better at your grammar and capitalize every I you write....Other than that, it's really good.

And yes, they are called stanzas.  

[Niko Bleau]

I thought that was fantastic!! it was really good