More poetry!

[Niko Bleau]

I have no idea why, I just think I'll die

Only one step closer and then it's done, but what's the use if it's no fun

This is you and me, me and you

All the way to the end, until that hateful bend

Towards the end of this sad world, like a lost and forgotten baton once twirled

Like the cold and dark feelings of the night, worried, held close and bunched tight

I hear the lost sounds of a high pitched chime, kiss me one last time  

[this-is-shloop]

that was hard for me to read, too much like my life. only i have no one to love, there's no me and some one else. only me. anyways i loved your poem. (even if it made me shed a tear)  

[The Raining Soul]

I like it. It's really good. But at some points, I thought the you went slightly off beat.  

[Zhiege]

It's alright. Maybe try making the syllables match a bit more between lines?