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van 66

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 8:30 am


Need For Speed
By
Van 66

One fine day in Miami, Florida there was a hot pursuit. The cops were chasing a fugitive in a jet black Lamborghini Diablo, which had blazing red flames on the side. The fugitives name was Adam. Adam went to a high security prison because he was driving recklessly all over the freeway. Then, he broke out but, nobody knows how he did it. There were three cops in pursuit. Ethan joined the pursuit earlier because he was slacking on the job, eating donuts. He couldn’t get fired. He had a wife and three kids back at home to support. Adam sped through a red light. Suddenly, two cops collided into traffic in the intersection. Ethan was trying to avoid several pot holes. Well, he hit one and his car spun out and slammed into a tree hard. So, Ethan called in for backup and a medic. Afterwards, there were six cop cars and one helicopter. The helicopter started deploying exploding barrels of gas. But, Adam just swerved around each carefully.
Unfortunately, a few barrels hit a cop car. The cop car did three barrel rolls. Then, it exploded next to a fiery red Ferrari F50. Tragically, the people in both cars died. A cop car pulled up to the accident. Afterwards, Travis in his silver 911 Turbo joined the pursuit because he was a good friend of the person in the Ferrari F50. Travis knew he would get arrested for trying to pursue Adam. The helicopter deployed a spike strip in front of the 911 Turbo. The car skidded to a halt inches from the spike strip. Travis just about got out of his car when a cop named Mike yelled “Get out of the car and put your hands behind your head” into his speaker phone. Travis obeyed so he wouldn’t get beaten badly. He had to do a year in the state penitentiary. Now back to the pursuit. The pursuit now took place in Orlando, Florida. Two cops were about 1,000 feet away from the Lamborghini. Both had bazookas in their hands. The first cop was Jack. The second cop was Will. Jack fired but missed. Now it was up to Will to blow up the car. Before that moment came Will got hit by the Lamborghini. Will’s bazooka fired but it hit a police helicopter instead. It only took a few seconds to hit the ground. Small pieces of glass flew into Jack’s eyes. After that moment he knew he would be blind for the rest of his life. His wife Sara took the disability real hard. She knew she had to take care of Jack for many years to come. A few hours later all of the vehicles were located in Jacksonville, Florida. The pursuit wasn’t announced on TV yet. Heck! The government didn’t even know about it. I thought the government was supposed to know about everything! Anyway back to the pursuit. Adam was about five miles from the state border. There were only three cop cars on Adam. The cops were Alex, David, and Mark. A few minutes later Adam ran over a spike strip and didn’t even know it. The Lamborghini started sliding towards the Georgia border. The Lamborghini slowed to a halt when Adam was about 0.7 miles from the border. Adam popped the trunk and got out. He jolted to the trunk and revealed an electric scooter. It was one that went about 60mph. When Adam was 0.3 miles from the border the scooter shutdown. Adam thought to himself “Damn, I forgot to charge the darn thing.” He had to run the rest of the way. The cops stopped a few feet away. They got out and stood behind their doors with their guns in hand. Alex got impatient and shot Adam in the leg three times. But that didn’t stop him from getting over the state border.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 3:10 pm


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