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Zhiege

PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:16 pm
Death is like a chair
A comfort so well-meaning
I stand still
(outside any important limitations)
And watch the sky fall
I stare at my shattered reflection
And I wonder what Death feels
(on the other side)

If I stay here, forever myself,
I am quite unknown
If I stay here,
In this unbroken silence
This piercing sound so loud
I can’t hear myself scream
Watching my own heart
Grind slowly to a stop
Maybe I might just leave
Dazed I fly
None could ever catch me here
-Zhiege

If you like it or would like to critque it, please comment. It would be much appreciated.  
PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 3:00 am
I like it.  

The Raining Soul


Zhiege

PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 2:58 pm
EmoJirachi
I like it.

Thanks! ^^  
PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 10:55 am
Wicked awesome. ^_^  

Rejected Conformity


Zhiege

PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 4:27 pm
Rejected Conformity
Wicked awesome. ^_^

I'm glad I'm not a total failure with poetry. 3nodding  
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