Hand In Hand (A Short Poem)

[ryozo125]

A poem i thought of in my spare time that i thought was at least a little bit good


As our blood drips to the floor
hand in hand
our lifes they are no more

You knew i had suicidle thoughts
you took a chance
and loved me
now the thoughts have plauged you

So now
hand in hand
are lives they are no more  

[walk like thunder]

short n sharp. i likey.
(lives, sucidal, plagued, our) <-- sorry, im a b***h for spelling!

good poem <3  

[ElVl0]

not bad its ok ^^