Another one of my stupid poems....

[wildfiresdeath]

I look at you

You look at me

I know we are both thinking

the exact same thing.

I need help,

But you can't give any.

I love you.

don't ever ******** question that.

that probribly why we'll never get along.

if i was better at finding the right words to say

i would need to write thse mother ******** poems...

when i confess to you these feelings

they are no longer known as an opinion of my mind.

now i know that you know

i love you

and we wont ever be able to get along

and most of the time

i am so caught up that i cant even speak

and mabe i do need to stop writing

shitty poems

as i continue to look you shy away

and turn your face from mine

i say nothing but continue to stare

waiting for you to say somthing in reply

to comfort me and show me you really do care

you turn back around

give me a cold meaningless smile

and walk away

you didnt turn back when i started to cry.

it only conferms

you dont love me

and all you wanted to do was ignore me.

and never getalong

you just wanted me to shut up,

stop looking at the world with the eyes of a child

and stop wring my shitty poems.

 

[ElVl0]

hmm ur siggy is amusing whats up with ur emo bf ? XD
the poem is umm ok you need to work on it abit more  

[walk like thunder]

i like it...it doesnt rhyme and it gives a good sense of your feelings
its sad =( which is better than being emotionless