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Simplistic-Tyranny

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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 12:14 am

I'm kinda in a semi-depressed/mourning mood over the passing of my stepfather's fiancee, and I drew an angel I want to give to him at her funeral Wednesday.

However, I wanted someones constructive criticism, because It's 3am, and I just want to know what others think of it.

Sorry for it being so big, I took the image url off of my deviantART account.

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 11:01 am

[♠♠]iBravedtreacherousSTReeTS
AndKidsStrungOutOnHomemadeSpeed._______
and we shared a bed in which i could not sleep.
at all, woo, hoo, woo, hoooo.
cause at night the sun in retreat.

madetheskylinelooklikecrookedteeth___________
In the mouth of a man who was devouring us both.
You're so cute when you're slurring your speech,
but they're closing the bar and they want us to leave.

That is very pretty and wonderful
That poem almost made me cry
Kudos ^.^

And you can't find nothing at all,
if there was nothing there all along.
No you can't find nothing at all,
if there was nothing there all along.
i'mawarheadversusheartandit'salwaysthisway_______

myHEADisWeakMYheartalwaysSPeAKS

you took my heart and ripped it in two

But for some weird reason i am still in love with you

Queen Epic Phail

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iluvpolkadots

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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 7:36 pm

Its beautiful...I think it should be centered, and maybe a bit bigger. But its beautifully written and I wanted to cry!

Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 4:40 pm

that is SO beatuiful crying I love it!

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Bweezy4l

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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 2:13 pm

it's beautiful. i dont find anything wrong with it. it could make one get emotional.

Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 9:14 pm

Even though it's been a long time after you since this topic, I want to say that I think the poem is very beautiful and deep. I've never thought about death this way, and your poem has opened my eyes so much more.